tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post622342738918451372..comments2024-03-05T13:51:24.898-07:00Comments on Spacefreighters Lounge : Six Sentence SundayUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-33884326472141429832011-01-24T21:27:36.340-07:002011-01-24T21:27:36.340-07:00I agree with everyone: the last line is great.I agree with everyone: the last line is great.Emily Calehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02565254147540303402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-14489702521595779042011-01-24T08:50:44.841-07:002011-01-24T08:50:44.841-07:00haha ping away! LOVE IThaha ping away! LOVE ITJoAnne Kenrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15234275353277804224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-43443290359478553772011-01-24T02:34:49.031-07:002011-01-24T02:34:49.031-07:00"...pinged him"!!!! Love it!"...pinged him"!!!! Love it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02422942404526720212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-48087554338564070902011-01-23T19:41:43.649-07:002011-01-23T19:41:43.649-07:00Loved the lines. Great emotion (loss and regret.) ...Loved the lines. Great emotion (loss and regret.) Very well done.Trishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03232378093017812896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-85938267219545603452011-01-23T17:41:07.494-07:002011-01-23T17:41:07.494-07:00@ Alanna LOL Doubt you'll find it. It's...@ Alanna LOL Doubt you'll find it. It's futuristic slang I made up for this story.<br /><br />Thanks for your comments everyone.L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-58869974635754100952011-01-23T16:30:24.169-07:002011-01-23T16:30:24.169-07:00Great six!
(googling Pinged now)Great six!<br /><br />(googling Pinged now)Alanna Cocahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15023188288919892588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-4400333575752091242011-01-23T15:43:13.970-07:002011-01-23T15:43:13.970-07:00Love the ending line Punchy and fun - a good contr...Love the ending line Punchy and fun - a good contrast to the serious paragraph above.Joleene Naylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03655661228273361991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-23464795528055741102011-01-23T15:23:54.007-07:002011-01-23T15:23:54.007-07:00You can really feel her longing and regret. Love t...You can really feel her longing and regret. Love the little twist of humor at the end : )Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-69658358120174848882011-01-23T14:57:55.786-07:002011-01-23T14:57:55.786-07:00I like the melancholy vibe to this.
http://lindam...I like the melancholy vibe to this.<br /><br />http://lindamorriswriter.blogspot.com/<br /><br />Six Sentence SundayLinda Morrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05113981098789732198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-63896234806195649662011-01-23T14:37:32.573-07:002011-01-23T14:37:32.573-07:00Love it! Nice release on the last line.Love it! Nice release on the last line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-29705824376087385712011-01-23T13:52:05.946-07:002011-01-23T13:52:05.946-07:00Nice emotion and setting here, thanks for sharing....Nice emotion and setting here, thanks for sharing.Leigh Ellwoodhttp://www.leighellwood.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-44718305046498778572011-01-23T13:23:21.890-07:002011-01-23T13:23:21.890-07:00Mmmmmmmm yummy space captains.Mmmmmmmm yummy space captains.Darcy Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15263535041680335553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-80901367371301473952011-01-23T12:42:05.442-07:002011-01-23T12:42:05.442-07:00Thanks, everyone, for your continued comments.
Ka...Thanks, everyone, for your continued comments.<br /><br />Kaye, I hope you'll be able to read this book, too! :) Glad you're enjoying my work. So glad you're back from the burried-in-work realm.L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-73257774293273072172011-01-23T12:14:19.577-07:002011-01-23T12:14:19.577-07:00Since I've been back, I've come to look fo...Since I've been back, I've come to look forward to your six sentences, Laurie! My, girl, you are such a good writer. I want this book!Kaye Manrohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03639814610213100626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-19860815294690043242011-01-23T11:13:10.960-07:002011-01-23T11:13:10.960-07:00I agree with everyone else...that last line is a v...I agree with everyone else...that last line is a very nice touch.D Carneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06453390999707087274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-88424757301729208612011-01-23T10:17:53.970-07:002011-01-23T10:17:53.970-07:00That is an awesome last line!That is an awesome last line!Lisa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04249215936412244450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-41842419745736131922011-01-23T09:52:03.636-07:002011-01-23T09:52:03.636-07:00I'm loving your responses @ "pinged."...I'm loving your responses @ "pinged." LOL<br /><br />Thanks to my IPs Arlene and Barbara, for reading lines from this story <i>yet again</i>. :)<br /><br />Getting a late start today, so off to comment on SSSers.L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-81739834716116583562011-01-23T09:27:23.251-07:002011-01-23T09:27:23.251-07:00ah. Pinging. true cyber sex.ah. Pinging. true cyber sex.Jayel Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16895398236919824214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-67935575407688592052011-01-23T09:10:47.277-07:002011-01-23T09:10:47.277-07:00Great snippet - looking forward to more :-)Great snippet - looking forward to more :-)LaurelCKrieglerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874628866547175842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-715853164816363612011-01-23T08:28:04.561-07:002011-01-23T08:28:04.561-07:00Nothing like regret to motivate a girl! Great six!...Nothing like regret to motivate a girl! Great six!Sandra Sookoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08864799097052526762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-7630220083022192202011-01-23T08:25:28.088-07:002011-01-23T08:25:28.088-07:00I remember that line, Laurie!! The essence of your...I remember that line, Laurie!! The essence of your story in these six sentences!!!!Well done.Barbara Elsborghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15825994197656747262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-88501697552119171952011-01-23T08:24:12.013-07:002011-01-23T08:24:12.013-07:00Love the regret she's feeling. Well done.Love the regret she's feeling. Well done.Sarah Grimmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03737049126767567901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-10877296776123799692011-01-23T07:27:04.671-07:002011-01-23T07:27:04.671-07:00Should have 'pinged' him? Now there's ...Should have 'pinged' him? Now there's an intriguing finish!Pip Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02141472079095619099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-3894126780842446822011-01-23T06:12:29.810-07:002011-01-23T06:12:29.810-07:00You qualify for best line sunday.
'Should have...You qualify for best line sunday.<br />'Should have pinged him.' Love it.<br />Love and regret shines from every word. Well done.Arlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13009609859622288428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-70481177071482811682011-01-23T03:55:46.566-07:002011-01-23T03:55:46.566-07:00The last sentence made me laugh. The rest feels so...The last sentence made me laugh. The rest feels so dramatic until then. Great six!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com