tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post8834504584058529105..comments2024-03-05T13:51:24.898-07:00Comments on Spacefreighters Lounge : Six Sentence SundayUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-75054779846670061282011-03-14T18:08:01.354-06:002011-03-14T18:08:01.354-06:00@ Jayel, Ella and Pippa
Glad you can appreciate L...@ Jayel, Ella and Pippa<br /><br />Glad you can appreciate Lissa's situation. *g* Thanks for stopping by!L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-35515735124315245462011-03-14T05:10:25.254-06:002011-03-14T05:10:25.254-06:00Great six! And frankly, I'd look too judging b...Great six! And frankly, I'd look too judging by that description. :)Pip Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02141472079095619099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-20353819742929165092011-03-13T21:13:01.312-06:002011-03-13T21:13:01.312-06:00Now he just sounds delish. Who wouldn't stare?...Now he just sounds delish. Who wouldn't stare?Ella Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00065576682504057608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-17394804729929654972011-03-13T17:43:45.201-06:002011-03-13T17:43:45.201-06:00AWOL. I love itAWOL. I love itJayel Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16895398236919824214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-11179670491421214102011-03-13T17:21:12.141-06:002011-03-13T17:21:12.141-06:00@Christine LOL That's a great line! Thanks for...@Christine LOL That's a great line! Thanks for your comment. :)L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-35124271355075451192011-03-13T17:06:15.367-06:002011-03-13T17:06:15.367-06:00I just love a man in a uniform...especially when h...I just love a man in a uniform...especially when he's not wearing it. Great six!Christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00793641285113529188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-33036782283795021282011-03-13T16:35:37.984-06:002011-03-13T16:35:37.984-06:00@Lindsay. Thank you. I've lived and breathed ...@Lindsay. Thank you. I've lived and breathed Army/National Guard for a long time. My DH is a retired LTC and I've had a 15 year career (so far) in civilian support for the military. This gave me some great dialogue for my Combined Joint Task Force crew.<br /><br />My hero in this story actually says "Huah." I have another character explain it means HUA--Heard, Understood and Acknowledged. It's ometimes seen as 'Hooah' but the pronunciation has been shortened so it sounds more like Hwah. <br /><br />The characters also use other military acronyms including a few I invented, like MAP--Mission Assignment Parameters.L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-74371834992440904272011-03-13T16:08:49.074-06:002011-03-13T16:08:49.074-06:00Writing Army mysteries I'm always on the prowl...Writing Army mysteries I'm always on the prowl for interesting phrasing and that one is one of the best I've ever read. Almost wish I'd used itLindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716003019499843582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-72644982580441778832011-03-13T16:08:19.011-06:002011-03-13T16:08:19.011-06:00Thank you SO much, Lauri! :DThank you SO much, Lauri! :DL. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-38337682821234138232011-03-13T16:01:08.479-06:002011-03-13T16:01:08.479-06:00Very smooth writing. You've got serious talent...Very smooth writing. You've got serious talent.Lauri J Owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11915434024514573480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-56698912155297018122011-03-13T15:19:08.722-06:002011-03-13T15:19:08.722-06:00Uh. Make that @Taryn @Susanna
I blame that shipj...Uh. Make that @Taryn @Susanna<br /><br />I blame that shipjumping "n" Nothing to do with the time change. Really. :]L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-65375885877140970472011-03-13T15:16:29.229-06:002011-03-13T15:16:29.229-06:00@Tarynn @Susana @Lisa Thanks so much for your tho...@Tarynn @Susana @Lisa Thanks so much for your thoughts and comments. You guys make my date.<br /><br />@Cate Thank you, thank you. And yes, isn't Sharon's news incredible! Can't wait until her novel comes out. Thanks for checking out our swag. It's an eclectic list, though somewhat SFR slanted. :)L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-81902462386186955482011-03-13T15:09:49.767-06:002011-03-13T15:09:49.767-06:00Such a fun six! Your description piqued my interes...Such a fun six! Your description piqued my interest too. Don't blame her a bit.<br />Congrats to Sharon too. Wow!<br />Off to check out the swag...Cate Mastershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01371792447604980848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-85495068746182002012011-03-13T15:04:15.237-06:002011-03-13T15:04:15.237-06:00Lol! That is an awesome last line!Lol! That is an awesome last line!Lisa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04249215936412244450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-2483489574514900642011-03-13T14:46:27.407-06:002011-03-13T14:46:27.407-06:00Hee! Love the parting shot.Hee! Love the parting shot.Susanna Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16149293228696867804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-31087043878732971142011-03-13T14:28:43.790-06:002011-03-13T14:28:43.790-06:00Oh, I just love the way you've described Mitch...Oh, I just love the way you've described Mitch in sleep and the way Lissa is caught in the act!Taryn Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130206764352777367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-9229955621492375992011-03-13T14:22:59.935-06:002011-03-13T14:22:59.935-06:00Thanks @Misa Oh yes, her itch doesn't get bet...Thanks @Misa Oh yes, her itch doesn't get better with time. LOL<br /><br />@Lindsay, thank you. I tried to work in military phrasing where I could--hopefully in some entertaining ways. :)L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-56572157722510144592011-03-13T13:54:50.188-06:002011-03-13T13:54:50.188-06:00Loved how 'her eyes were going AWOL'. That...Loved how 'her eyes were going AWOL'. That's a great line.Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716003019499843582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-63459846895984332322011-03-13T13:42:48.484-06:002011-03-13T13:42:48.484-06:00She's going to sleep with good dreams. And awa...She's going to sleep with good dreams. And awake with one hell of an itch! :D<br /><br />Love it, hehMisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14078445234042437694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-16166864185564284602011-03-13T13:21:19.288-06:002011-03-13T13:21:19.288-06:00@JSubject Excellent! Thanks for your feedback.
@...@JSubject Excellent! Thanks for your feedback.<br /><br />@Liana Brooks @Roberta Waker Thanks for stopping by and leaving your comments.L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-46551427489427588992011-03-13T12:47:07.069-06:002011-03-13T12:47:07.069-06:00REALLY enjoyed this!REALLY enjoyed this!Roberta Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10806214081554970161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-27200762613157938652011-03-13T11:40:59.211-06:002011-03-13T11:40:59.211-06:00Nice!Nice!Liana Brookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14587774916354749190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-58585009138261403832011-03-13T11:08:08.686-06:002011-03-13T11:08:08.686-06:00Fabulous description! Love the last line. It caugh...Fabulous description! Love the last line. It caught me by surprise as if I'd been the one caught staring. Great job!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-88363918483037865082011-03-13T10:28:06.504-06:002011-03-13T10:28:06.504-06:00@DL Thanks, oh CP. It's really hard showing s...@DL Thanks, oh CP. It's really hard showing some of this six sentences at a time.<br /><br />@Sarah LOL Exactly!<br /><br />@Sue Thanks. Do you have a link in SSS this week? Tell me which and I'll return the favor.<br /><br />@Arlene Ah yes, sweet, but frustrated dreams all the way to Jupiter. Thanks for your comments, oh other CP. :)<br /><br />@Eleri It was hard for me not to stare, too. *g*<br /><br />@Kaye Thanks so much for your comment and for stopping by each week to read my excerpt. :) Yes, we're all so excited for Sharon. This was such HUGE news!L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7808733415551134993.post-4762968435746536042011-03-13T09:11:32.597-06:002011-03-13T09:11:32.597-06:00LOL-- as always, I love your six, Laurie! I'd ...LOL-- as always, I love your six, Laurie! I'd stare too...!!<br /><br />Congrats again for the 25k!<br /><br />And gosh, I'm so happy for Sharon!Kaye Manrohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03639814610213100626noreply@blogger.com