Friday, December 22, 2023
Wednesday, December 20, 2023
Courting Disaster: What's With the Helmet?
...and the helmet he's been issued to go with it.
If you missed my earlier post about an excerpt from the opening of Courting Disaster, you can find it here.
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Jagger stood at the docking bay
entrance, trying to find any positives in this gigadam boondoggle. He’d be
flying solo, he reminded himself, just like the glory days of slicing through
space in his Rimmcraft Stiletto. It might not be all bad. That thought tumbled
and burned the moment he caught sight of the shipwreck at the end of the
boarding passage.
He checked the bay number again.
Yes. Right bay. He just couldn’t believe what was berthed there.
The Sheeban’s battered
two-deck carcass could’ve been a clunky, mid-ranged compost hauler that had
seen its best days centuries ago. They wanted him to transport an ambassador’s
daughter through a very treacherous region of space in this wreck?
What was the story here?
And his newly requisitioned
civilian attire? A worn set of coveralls, untailored, drab gray, and lacking
any insignias. People were going to take him for a second-rate mechanic in
these faded greaseskins instead of a top-flight Carduwan officer.
But that wasn’t the worst of it.
The garb came complete with a battered helmet and face shield. What was he
supposed to be—a pilot or a test-flight dummy?
Judging by the look of his vessel,
it was the latter.
The admiral couldn’t be serious
about this. Maybe this was Kareek’s idea of a joke? Or an elaborate hazing
meant to take him down a peg or two before he was presented with command of the
Meritorious?
He glanced at the small packet the
quartermaster had pressed into his hand. “There’s a purser’s safe under the
pilot’s console,” the non-com had told him. “Use these lock codes to open it
once you’ve cleared station and are on course for the Rift. It contains your
classified directive from Command.”
This “directive” would hopefully
shed a lot more light on the situation. Jagger gave the aged ship another
skeptical once-over. It was always an option to refuse a mission, but—he heaved
a weighty sigh—that had Career Ending Catastrophe stamped all over it.
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Thanks for stopping by to read a bit more of my upcoming release.
I'll be taking a short hiatus from now until the New Year (hey, where did 2023 go, anyway?), but I'll be back with more posts in January.
Have a wonderful holiday!
Monday, December 18, 2023
Courting Disaster is at the Top of my 2024 Resolutions!
Captain Navene Jagger smiled as he
gazed out the viewport of the immense space station. Talstar. Home of the
Universal Flight Academy, orbiting the lush blue world of Veros. Good memories
here. Heady times with his fellow cadets during the three calendars it had
required to earn his wings. He’d left the program with salutatorian honors.
But without Drea.
His smile slipped. Not every
recollection of Talstar was a good one. The broken engagement. The devastation
in Drea’s eyes. Watching her walk away for the last time. It had been his
greatest defeat—Hades, his only defeat. And he had no one to blame but
himself.
He’d left Talstar the day after
graduation, stripped of his plans to test her father’s Mennelsohn prototype,
and promptly joined the Carduwan military.
That had been ten calendars ago.
Ten very long calendars. He’d spent the first seven trying to apologize to Drea
for the unforgiveable, trying to prove to her he’d changed, trying desperately
to win her back.
Then Sair happened. Drea had
fallen in love with an escaped slave. A nobody. Or so he’d thought.
That was when he’d finally grasped
the scale of the wedge he’d driven between them by his foolish, ego-driven
folly. He’d done this. He’d destroyed their relationship. Not
Drea. And, gods knew, not even Sair.
That realization had sparked his transformation. He’d reinvented himself, stopped being a ladies’ man, stopped being anything other than a dedicated officer married to his career. He didn’t have love…but at least he had pride. And purpose.
Friday, December 15, 2023
More on a Work in Progress
Not too long ago I wrote a blog on a villain in one of my novels and on some of the dynamics surrounding villains and how they use lies to create a false narrative. If you didn't catch it, you can read it here.
Roughly twenty-one years prior to the opening of my novel, working title "Draxis," there was a legendary infamous clash that became known as the Battle for Draxis (the working title of my WIP novella). It was the first time in their over 13,000 year history that this planet had experienced a war between two factions, where citizens died as a result of the conflict, and it shook the civilization to its foundation.
This terrible clash arose from a lie. Or more accurately, a series of related lies and half-truths. One leader repeatedly accused his challenger of being a would-be usurper and a pariah who would lead the planet to ruin and enslave the populace (when in fact, the one making the claims was actually the one plotting to do all of those things).
A manipulator can always find clever ways to twist the truth and turn the tables on his enemy, even when the truth should be quite obvious to any reasonably intelligent human being (...or reasonably intelligent alien, in this case). Sometimes people will buy into lies simply because they want to believe them, and because they prefer the status quo over change. Even if it promises to be for the better, many see change as disruptive and unsettling. "Don't upset the apple cart!"
My mission in writing this story is to present the unfolding drama in such a way that the reader can't be sure who is truly the Good Guy and who is the Bad Guy. Only the two opponents' actions and decisions in the course of the events will reveal their true characters.
This story is told from the perspective of Giadius [GEE ah Dee us], who is an important figure in the saga not only for who he is, but for how he later influences two central characters in the following novel. But at this point in time, he's definitely standing firmly in the grey area of doubt. He, like the reader, will have to make his own determination who to align with as events unfold.
I anticipate this story will be novella length, and if all goes according to plan, I'll release it as a companion to the full-length novel.
Here's a quick peek at the opening, which I'm just beginning to hammer out. It's still very much a work in progress. All comments or questions welcome.
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The Great Palace
The City of Tahr
Draxis
From the high balcony, Giadius watched a star fall from the infinite blackness of the heavens. A burning star, its light flooding the dark plazas below in an expanding circle of illumination. Sound followed the light, a low rumble that crescendoed into a terrifying roar. Next came the blasts of searing heat. Giadius raised a hand to shield his face from the burn.
In the city below him, those awakened by the calamity rushed into the streets, screaming in terror. He felt no panic. The knowledge and memories of such an event had faded from the conscience of Draxis a generation ago. But he understood. Ultas hadn't prepared his people, so what could this mean to them but the end of their world?
Members of the royal staff flooded onto the balcony beside him, freezing in place to cry and curse and stare. Giadius exploited the confusion to slip through their ranks and back inside the palace before any came to their collective senses. He sidestepped the squad of guards charging up the steps to the second level and made way down to the now unguarded entry to the royal chambers below. Pitting his full weight against the massive door, he pushed it open just enough to angle through. Outside, he found the halls of the palace deserted.
This was his epiphany--his sign. A chance to slip his invisible bonds and disappear in the chaos. He knew what this meant. He knew who was coming.
He would be the first to meet the invaders.