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Tuesday, January 29, 2019
Monday, January 28, 2019
Grey Area Characters: Good Guys or Borderline Villains?
Before I launch into my "character assassination" blog this week (no worries--it's one of my fictional characters!), first a bit of news:
The SFR Galaxy Awards are Coming!
This is the week!
This Thursday, January 31st, will be the Seventh Anniversary of this unique, SFR-only recognition(s) of excellence in the science fiction romance genre--otherwise known as the 2018 SFR Galaxy Awards!
Please join us on the awards site to catch all seven rounds of the unveilings and "surprisings," where the authors never know they've won--or that they're even in the running--until it's announced, so the "surprise!" is definitely part of the fun.
2018 SFR GALAXY AWARDS
I'm also asking that if you're a member of the Science Fiction Romance community as either a writer or a reader, that you help support the awards by tuning in, commenting, sharing on social media and congratulating the winners.
We want to ensure these awards continue on into the future, and they need a lot more support to make that possible.
Thank you.
Now on to my regularly scheduled blog!
Grey Area Characters in Fiction: Good Guys or Borderline Villains?
I've been thinking a lot lately about the subject of non-compromise, and how it paints characters in fiction a shadowy shade of grey.
As human beings, our very nature requires us to work out compromises in difficult situations. Let's face it, we don't all see eye-to-eye. We're a species with as many opinions and ideas about how-things-should-be as there probably are individuals on this planet. No two think exactly alike. No two dream alike. And certainly no two imagine a "perfect world" in quite the same way.
But somewhere between the polarized light side and dark side, there has to be a shaded area where both opposing groups can at least come to some sort of agreement that's a win-win, or at least a semi okay-semi okay, for both. It's very frustrating when it doesn't happen, indicating that someone is planting their feet, crossing their arms, and refusing to see any outcome that's not 100% "their way."
I have a character in Inherit the Stars who frequently exhibits these traits. He's authoritative, strong-willed, unbending, and at times, malevolently manipulative. He only sees things from one side--his side. And during the course of the story, he vacillates between being a great military leader and a hard-nosed ass.
He does this because he's striving for one particular outcome...and anyone not seeing things his way be damned. That "anyone" can include his subordinates, his peers, the people he loves, and other figures who are supposed to be his superiors. The nickname he acquires in the novel is one that suits him well--The Immovable Object.
(His love interest acquires the equally descriptive tag of "The Unstoppable Force." I think you can see where that relationship is going--they're on course to burn each other up in the friction they generate.)
But the title he's saddled with isn't one of respect. People who refuse to bend--whether it's a matter of principle or personal philosophy--usually end up living with one of two outcomes. They are proven marginally right, or they are proven unequivocally, irredeemably wrong.
Admiral Ry Mennelsohn is often the "good guy" in my novel that readers love to hate. He's the brother of the heroine, Drea Mennelsohn, and he is, by all accounts, a hardliner.
He's been plugged into a role that, in essence, is a resistance leader. As the son of the late, great Zaviar Mennelsohn, he's stepped up to take the reins of a rising insurrection and complete his father's vision.
But he doesn't have the charisma, the good will, or the knack of negotiating that his father possessed, so he compensates for his shortcomings by refusing to compromise with his opponents, no matter the cost. Admiral Mennelsohn is definitely a "my way or the highway" kinda guy.
That's not leadership. It's belligerence.
His unyielding will sets up some powerful moral dilemmas for readers to ponder. Is what he did right? Wrong? Reasonable? Crossing the line? And ultimately, do the ends justify the means?
Eventually, the good admiral faces a reckoning for his behavior, and for once, shows a bit of compassion in acquiescing--though begrudgingly--while rationalizing that he was only trying to do the right thing.
Sadly, history is littered with individuals who try to "do the right thing" in entirely the wrong way. It always seems to catch up with them...especially when they wear their justification like a big, old pair of horse blinders.
I think Presidential Medal of Freedom recipient and social philosopher Eric Hoffer once summed it up best:
Want to read more on the subject? I recommend this excellent article:
ProWriting Aid: Why You Should Start Writing Morally Grey Characters
The SFR Galaxy Awards are Coming!
This is the week!
This Thursday, January 31st, will be the Seventh Anniversary of this unique, SFR-only recognition(s) of excellence in the science fiction romance genre--otherwise known as the 2018 SFR Galaxy Awards!
Please join us on the awards site to catch all seven rounds of the unveilings and "surprisings," where the authors never know they've won--or that they're even in the running--until it's announced, so the "surprise!" is definitely part of the fun.
2018 SFR GALAXY AWARDS
I'm also asking that if you're a member of the Science Fiction Romance community as either a writer or a reader, that you help support the awards by tuning in, commenting, sharing on social media and congratulating the winners.
We want to ensure these awards continue on into the future, and they need a lot more support to make that possible.
Thank you.
Now on to my regularly scheduled blog!
Grey Area Characters in Fiction: Good Guys or Borderline Villains?
I've been thinking a lot lately about the subject of non-compromise, and how it paints characters in fiction a shadowy shade of grey.
As human beings, our very nature requires us to work out compromises in difficult situations. Let's face it, we don't all see eye-to-eye. We're a species with as many opinions and ideas about how-things-should-be as there probably are individuals on this planet. No two think exactly alike. No two dream alike. And certainly no two imagine a "perfect world" in quite the same way.
But somewhere between the polarized light side and dark side, there has to be a shaded area where both opposing groups can at least come to some sort of agreement that's a win-win, or at least a semi okay-semi okay, for both. It's very frustrating when it doesn't happen, indicating that someone is planting their feet, crossing their arms, and refusing to see any outcome that's not 100% "their way."
I have a character in Inherit the Stars who frequently exhibits these traits. He's authoritative, strong-willed, unbending, and at times, malevolently manipulative. He only sees things from one side--his side. And during the course of the story, he vacillates between being a great military leader and a hard-nosed ass.
He does this because he's striving for one particular outcome...and anyone not seeing things his way be damned. That "anyone" can include his subordinates, his peers, the people he loves, and other figures who are supposed to be his superiors. The nickname he acquires in the novel is one that suits him well--The Immovable Object.
(His love interest acquires the equally descriptive tag of "The Unstoppable Force." I think you can see where that relationship is going--they're on course to burn each other up in the friction they generate.)
But the title he's saddled with isn't one of respect. People who refuse to bend--whether it's a matter of principle or personal philosophy--usually end up living with one of two outcomes. They are proven marginally right, or they are proven unequivocally, irredeemably wrong.
Admiral Ry Mennelsohn is often the "good guy" in my novel that readers love to hate. He's the brother of the heroine, Drea Mennelsohn, and he is, by all accounts, a hardliner.He's been plugged into a role that, in essence, is a resistance leader. As the son of the late, great Zaviar Mennelsohn, he's stepped up to take the reins of a rising insurrection and complete his father's vision.
But he doesn't have the charisma, the good will, or the knack of negotiating that his father possessed, so he compensates for his shortcomings by refusing to compromise with his opponents, no matter the cost. Admiral Mennelsohn is definitely a "my way or the highway" kinda guy.
That's not leadership. It's belligerence.
His unyielding will sets up some powerful moral dilemmas for readers to ponder. Is what he did right? Wrong? Reasonable? Crossing the line? And ultimately, do the ends justify the means?
Eventually, the good admiral faces a reckoning for his behavior, and for once, shows a bit of compassion in acquiescing--though begrudgingly--while rationalizing that he was only trying to do the right thing.
Sadly, history is littered with individuals who try to "do the right thing" in entirely the wrong way. It always seems to catch up with them...especially when they wear their justification like a big, old pair of horse blinders.
I think Presidential Medal of Freedom recipient and social philosopher Eric Hoffer once summed it up best:
"The uncompromising attitude is more indicative
of an inner uncertainty than a deep conviction."
I have to confess Ry has been a fun character to write because of his obstinance, but he's probably caused as much anguish for readers as the true villains. Let me share, as the author, that he's on a direct course to future retribution in this saga--both militarily and personally.
Will he be redeemed? Stay tuned.
Will he be redeemed? Stay tuned.
Want to read more on the subject? I recommend this excellent article:
ProWriting Aid: Why You Should Start Writing Morally Grey Characters
Have a great week.
Friday, January 25, 2019
GLASS: MORE TWISTS THAN A FUNHOUSE MIRROR
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| Superhero, villain, mastermind: all connected in GLASS |
The villainous mastermind of M. Night
Shyamalan’s horror/thriller/fantasy trilogy that ends with the film GLASS (in
theaters now) has a theory about superheroes and their evil counterparts.
Elijah Price, aka Mr. Glass (Samuel L. Jackson), believes the supernatural heroes
and villains of comic book fame are real, created by extraordinary events or
challenges in people’s lives. He has made it his life’s work to prove this
theory, even if it means he must manipulate the lives of others as part of his Grand
Experiment. Just how far he’s been willing to go in his experimentation becomes
chillingly clear in this last film of Shyamalan’s cinematic triptych.
The SIXTH SENSE director began this journey
with UNBREAKABLE (2000), the story of reluctant superhero David Dunn, able to
sense evil in others with a touch and invulnerable to every weakness except
water. Dunn, you see, acquired his superpowers by surviving a drowning by
bullies as a child. He only begins to understand who and what he is after he finds
himself the sole survivor of a train wreck years later. He meets Price, a comic
book collector who suffers from a congenital defect called osteogenesis imperfecta, or brittle bone disease.
The two men are, in effect, “broken” vs. “unbreakable,”
and Price believes they are destined to be arch-enemies, struggling for the soul
of the world. Dunn wins their first film encounter, and we, the audience, are
supposed to believe that’s that.
The second film in the series, SPLIT (2016),
stars James McAvoy in an acting tour-de-force as a serial killer with multiple
personality disorder. One of Kevin Wendell Crumb’s 24 personalities is Hedwig,
a nine-year-old boy, the age when, not uncoincidentally, Kevin’s disturbed mother
started abusing him as a child. Another is The Beast, the supernaturally strong
creature that actually does the killing, aided by certain other members of what
Kevin refers to as The Horde of personalities.
One of the teenage girls The Horde kidnaps
in SPLIT forms a tenuous connection with the gentler “Kevin” persona and is
allowed to live. Casey is eventually rescued, though The Horde escapes, and a
final scene in the film refers us back to both David Dunn and Elijah Price from
UNBREAKABLE.
Which brings us to the final chapter in
GLASS. Dunn is still cruising the streets to identify evil-doers and bring them
to justice, though he is trying to maintain a low profile. No bright cape, no
tights, and certainly no headlines for this guy, just an old rain poncho (water
is his Kryptonite, remember?). His son Joseph (Spencer Treat Clark from
UNBREAKABLE) is grown now and pushing him to do more. Price is confined to a
mental hospital, heavily sedated for everyone’s good.
The Horde, however, is up to its old tricks,
kidnapping young girls and chaining them to pipes in an abandoned factory in
Philly. Dunn finds them and rescues them, but things take a turn when both The
Beast and our superhero are trapped by police mid-fight outside the factory and
hauled off to the same asylum where Price is imprisoned. Seems there is an
impassioned young psychiatrist (Sarah Paulson) with new technology and new
methodology who is out to convince villains and superheroes alike there are no
such thing as superpowers.
She almost convinces us, too. But, then, we
know the Elijah Price (that’s “first name Mr., last name Glass”) who’s slumped
drooling in that wheelchair is hiding something, don’t we? Turns out his
machinations have deeper implications that anyone could have predicted, for
everyone involved.
There are more twists and turns in this plot
than a North Carolina scenic byway, so the ending of GLASS doesn’t disappoint.
I can only hope it doesn’t take Shyamalan another three years (much less the16
years between UNBREAKABLE AND SPLIT) to take up the storyline from where he
left it. Because, as Elijah explains to his long-suffering mother, “No, Mama!
This wasn’t a showdown! It was an origin story all along!”
(GLASS is definitely a GO, even if you
missed the earlier two films. It’s not gory or nightmare-inducing, but it will
make you think. Well worth it just to see Samuel L. Jackson and James McAvoy
chew the scenery, though Bruce Willis could have been given more to do.)
Cheers, Donna
Thursday, January 24, 2019
Misfits 3 is taking shape
Writing is slowly continuing on my work in progress. Anybody
who tells you that "writing is easy" has either never actually tried
it, or has an alter ego sitting over there in an alternative universe whispering
words at them. I don't have one of those. Sometimes I wish I did.
This is the third Morgan's Misfits book. In a way, writing a
series is easier than a stand-alone book. The characters are (mainly) already created
so you, the author, already know a lot about them. The tech's created, too, so
you know what ships, weapons, nifty tools and things your characters have and
what they haven't. The interesting thing is that the DIS-advantage of writing a
series is all the same things. You have to be careful not to change the details
about your characters – eye colour, height, background. Changes to mindset have
to be a progression. You can’t introduce a brand-new piece of tech without an
explanation, or new aliens. It's a balancing act.
I should explain that this series is a set of stand-alone stories,
a bit like a detective series or the Famous Five (ha). You'll meet a core of
the same characters, but each story is about a new situation not related to the
previous books. The core characters - Toreni,
Jirra, and Chet - change and grow in each book.Crossmar and Shar Burk, two massive, populated space stations, once again appear in this story. And you'll get to visit the Manesai Union's capital, Mahanadi. Morgan Selwood and Admiral Ravindra will both make appearances, and there's a brand new love story developing.
I haven't finished writing a blurb yet, but this will give
you an idea of where this story will take you.
Marisa, last mistress of Governor Soldar, manages to escape alive, if battered and bruised, from an attempt to kill her. What did she overhear to earn a death sentence?
Here's a snippet.
"You
said you were getting worried when Habid took you to a different apartment. Was
that just because it was out of routine?" Chet asked. "Was Soldar any
different? Did anything happen before that might have led to your removal? Any
sign of another woman in his sights?"
Marisa
shoved away Habid's assault and thought about the question. "I wasn't
aware of anyone else. We had sex the night before, as normal as I'd come to expect
from him." She concentrated. "Then somebody came. He left me asleep,
or so he thought. Went out in a robe. I heard voices, so I got up to snoop. He
caught me. He wasn't happy." He'd been angry, his eyes narrowed to slits.
"I told him I heard voices, I was curious. He told me not to be curious,
but he seemed to accept I'd heard and seen nothing. He fucked me hard, made it
painful, making sure I knew my place."
Chet's
nostrils flared. "He hurt you?"
"Sure.
Not much more than usual. He was putting me in my place, issuing a warning, I
think." She bit her lip. "I didn't pick it as time to go." She'd
always thought she'd know when her time was up, when she'd have to run. She'd
been wrong.
"Did
you hear anything?"
"Not
much. Soldar was very happy about something. I caught a few words. 'Success',
'ship'. Maybe it was about the ship you're looking for?" She looked at the
faces. They exchanged glances.
"Anything
else? Did you know who he was talking to? Did he mention names? Places?"
Marisa ran
the encounter back through her mind. Muffled words, laughter from Soldar, the
clink of glasses. "I didn't recognize the voice of the man he talked to.
So, I'd say he wasn't one of the regular staff. I didn't recognize any place
names. He was really pleased at that point. I know he shared a drink with
whoever it was. I think he did say 'Dasilva' and something like 'tell someone'.
Dasilva's a Vesha Hai Sur. President of
Indinara, a planet not too far from Shar Burk. In fact, he's pretty much a
neighbor."
"He's
not a nice man, by all accounts," Jirra said. "He and Soldar ought to
get along. But maybe they're too much alike."
Marisa
shrugged. "Soldar controls the media on Shar Burk. Any reports on Dasilva
are always negative."
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Meanwhile, work goes on. It'll be a few weeks yet. You'll be among the first to know when it's done.
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