Happy Fourth of July!!!!!
Being that Monday is my blog day, I seem to hit a lot of the holidays. :) Here's hoping you are celebrating the birth of our nation almost 250 years ago with lots of fun stuff -- barbecues, fireworks, get-togethers, and, of course, a three-day weekend! (Don't you love it when the 4th falls on a Monday or a Friday?)
If you're just discovering this serialized "aquatic SFR" story now, you can catch up on everything posted to date at this link: The Shell and the Star
For those reading along each week, we left Jinn and Trey last week about to have a serious talk after a skinny dip together in the secluded cove. And then a ruckus from the direction of the Boggy Ball courts drew his attention--and him--away, leaving Jinn all alone and unsettled on a rock in the middle of the deserted cove.
Today's episode has a few "fireworks" of it's own (so to speak). Make sure your seat belts are fastened and your tray is in the upright and locked position. Things could get bumpy.
CHAPTER SEVEN
Jinn watched Trey’s agile form
slide through the blue water until he disappeared out the mouth of the cove.
She adjusted her dress, pulling at the wet fabric where it molded to her skin.
His discarded fins floated at the edge of the cove, bumping against the rocks
with each small wave. Kneeling on the ledge, her fingers curled tight around a
handhold that jutted from the rock. Why had he left her? What was wrong?
Too frightened to swim after him,
too terrified to remain stranded alone on this small table of rock, she pulled
her legs up and hugged them to her chest, feeling vulnerable and alone. Casting
her gaze to the far end of the desolate bay, she longed for the security of her
bubble. For the safety of Talstar.
She didn’t belong here, abandoned
and alone, on a rock in an alien sea.
Jinn anxiously fixed her eyes on
the entrance to the cove watching for Trey’s return, her heart drumming in her
chest. What if he didn’t return? What would she do? Try to swim to her bubble?
Would she drown without Trey at her side to support her? He’d told her to wait
but never said he’d come back. Could she know in her heart that he would?
Jinn spied a dark shape snaking into
the cove, coming toward her beneath the surface—a monstrous form and so not
Trey. She froze in place on the small slab of rock.
Far beneath the water, a twisting,
red-tipped black tentacle found the base of her perch and began to probe its
way upward, as if it could taste her scent on the stone. What was this horrible
beast? And what would it do when it found her?
Something strong and wet wrapped
around her ankle. She started, twisting to find Trey behind her with his hand
encircling her leg, tugging her gently off her perch.
“Come with me, now,” he whispered.
Jinn slipped into the water without
question and Trey towed her in the direction of the rocks at the side of the
cove. What was he doing? The creature would trap them here! Wasn’t their only
chance of escape to make for the open water? Or to make for the safety of her
bubble?
Trey stopped at the wall and pulled
her up beside him, placing her hands on the stone. “Climb!” he ordered.
She eyed the uneven surface before
staring at Trey in confusion. “What do you mean?”
His face set in a determination
scowl, and he braced both hands on the rock, hoisting his body out of the
water. Sliding his feet up under him on the flat rock, he straightened, his
body rising vertically into the air. Jinn stared, dumbstruck. The strength it
must take to do such a thing!
He bent at the waist, leaning
toward her. Jinn was afraid he’d tumble back into the sea, but instead he
extended his hands to her. “Grab hold. It’s coming!”
Jinn thrust her hands into his and
Trey hauled her from the waves, her feet still kicking. Her ankles scraped
against the sharp rocks, and once her feet were on the solid surface, her legs
did little to support her against the crush of full gravity.
Trey pulled her arm around his
shoulders while he slid his own behind her back and urged her forward. She took
two faltering steps and her legs buckled from the strain, muscles burning. Her
long, wet hair felt like a heavy weight on her shoulders. Jinn glanced over her
shoulder, fear flaring in her chest when she saw the giant creature lurking in
the waters just below.
“Keep moving,” Trey ordered in an
urgent whispered. “Lean on me. And try to keep your feet under you.”
She tried. She just didn’t have the
strength to support her weight as he did. Even though she spent that required
time in the half-gravity spinners
on Talstar to strengthen muscle
and bone density, her body couldn’t adjust to the unrelenting burden of the
planet’s surface gravity.
Jinn stumbled and fell. “I can’t!”
she gasped.
He scooped her up in his arms and
Jenn clung to his neck as he picked a path up the tumbled surface of smooth,
black rocks, each movement of his feet taking them away from the waters, higher
and further from danger.
How could he do this? Not only move his own body, upright, but carry her weight as well? She’d never believed such a thing possible.
A rumbling sounded from the sea below and Jinn gasped in terror when the creature emerged from the water with a frothing hiss. “It’s right behind us!”
“I know.”
The path grew steeper and Trey
lowered her to her feet, pulling her tight to his side. “Can’t carry you…any
higher,” he panted. “Hold tight and keep moving.”
Jinn tried again to make her
sluggish legs work like his, but even when she managed to take a few steps, her
muscles soon faltered. Trey threw an apprehensive glance back, and strained to
prop her up while he climbed higher onto the rocks.
With a sudden shout, Trey pitched
forward, bracing his free hand against a boulder while tightening his grip on
her to keep her from the falling. She turned to see a long length of black
tentacle extending up from the sea to ensnare his ankle in the flame-red tip.
“Trey!”
“Go!” He pushed her ahead, out of
the tentacle’s reach and she sprawled on a flat outcropping as the creature
started to reel him in, pulling him down to the next rocky shelf, closer to
where it waited in the waters below.
“Trey!” she screamed again,
clinging to him with one hand. She couldn’t let the monster take him. Not Trey!
He grabbed the top of one large
stone, gaining a handhold, and twisted to wedge his body into a tight V between
two boulders, kicking at the tentacle and working to pry it off his ankle with
his other foot. His leg muscles bulged and strained as he thrashed, fighting
with an inhuman strength no ordinary Perling could possess. The monster began
flailing its tentacle, wrenching Trey from the security of the rocks. It raised
its horrible head above the water, flashing a circular row of gleaming, pointed
teeth.
Jinn hauled back on his hand with
all the strength she could muster, but the creature only tightened its hold and
gnashed its pointed teeth.
Trey looked up at her, his gaze
sought hers and he whispered, “Jinn.” Everything he held inside filled his eyes
and went straight to her heart. This was his goodbye. Trey knew the beast would
take him.
Ooooh - it's a bit like the Watcher at the gates of Moria!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Greta. I didn't even think of that scene, but yeah, now that you mention it, it definitely has some similarities. No magic riddle in Elven to save Trey, though. :)
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