I apologize for being so quiet (and missing my blog dates) for the last month. But I have an alibi.
It's August--or as it is better known to my cronies, "HELL MONTH."
Every year for the last 20 years, August has been my nemesis when it comes to blogging or just about anything to do with anything online. I'm beset by a day job monster project with a deadline that's chiseled in stone. Well, not really, but it is literally written into law.
From the outside looking in, it may seem like I get sucked into a black hole, but the real scenario is something more like this...
August has always meant I miss a lot of good stuff, like various SF/R events and cons, local summer fests and enjoying traditional summertime activities like barbecues and, well...weekends. Above my desk at work are a long row of very fat binders that represent each budget I've completed trailing back into antiquity.
I looked up at that orderly row of fat soldiers the other day and thought to myself, "Every one of those suckers represents a summer I gave up."
So it was kind of an odd feeling this weekend when I closed the cover on another budget and thought to myself. "Well, that's it." This was my final budget. My very last. My Grand Finale. There shall be no more. Zip. Zilch. Nada.
I'll be leaving my job as a budget director in February with a "Goodbye, Farewell...and Amen." No more lost Augusts, and hopefully no more annual disappearing acts. Which will leave me a lot more time to write and blog going forward. And that makes me smile.
Hasta la vista and have a great week.
Monday, August 31, 2015
Almost Back (I Survived Another August)
Friday, August 28, 2015
ON THE ROAD AGAIN . . .
Once again I'm dashing off these few lines just before I pack up my trusty computer and head for the hills. This time that phrase is meant literally. Sunday I'll be putting Blanca, the Queen of the Universe, and Shadow, AKA Chat Dieu, the Sidekick, in the back of my car and making the seven-hour drive to the little mountain town of Marshall, North Carolina, just north of Asheville. Hubby will be following with the rest of our worldly goods in a rental truck.
Yep, it's time for the Big Move! So no time for my usual long-winded post. Gotta pack up the kitchen!
My reports for the foreseeable future will come from Marshall!
Cheers, Donna
Yep, it's time for the Big Move! So no time for my usual long-winded post. Gotta pack up the kitchen!
My reports for the foreseeable future will come from Marshall!
Cheers, Donna
Star Trek: Renegades - listen to what the fans are saying
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I find this development fascinating. To me, it says two things:
- Trek fans are hankering after some of the development that's happening in the Star Wars universe. Even the name resonates. Star Wars has Rebels, Star Trek has Renegades.
- Trekkies aren't getting what they want from the big studios, so they put their hands in their pockets and funded the thing themselves.
I think it's a fantastic development. It's got *spaceships* after all.
Another reason why I think it's fantastic is because I don't want to know about dystopian plots. For me the real world is full of misery and to spare. It's the first thing I thought of when I read a write up in "The Weekend Australian"for two new hard SF titles - Seveneves by Neal Stephenson and Aurora by Kim Stanley Robinson. Both titles will please lovers of hard SF. Not a warp drive or hyper drive in sight.
Seveneves is set at a time when the moon (ours, that one up in our night sky) is destroyed. The pieces will come down in due course, and the world will have to start again. Meanwhile, a space station is to be set up to rescue the species. They've got two years.
Aurora is about a generation ship on its way to the stars. The story is set 500 years in the future and focuses on the problems faced by generations of people who have never known any life outside a spaceship.
There's nothing particularly original about either concept, but that's not the point. I'm sure, in the hands of these skilled writers, the stories will be well told. But (sorry) I'd rather have Guardians of the Galaxy, Star Wars: Rebels - and yes, Star Trek: Renegades. I'd rather be up there whipping through the light years in my souped-up freighter than thinking about the doomed billions who won't be getting up to that spacestation.
When you think about it, this is sort of the film version of fan fiction, and self publishing. If Big Business doesn't give you what you want - do it yourself. Cheers!
Tuesday, August 25, 2015
Tuesday Teaser - Booby Trapped Pants? #scifi #romance
The summer holidays are drawing to a close, and I'll soon be back to my normal blogging schedule. In the meantime, here's another snippet to entertain you. Taken from my short story Imprint in Tales from the SFR Brigade - a free scifi romance anthology - I'm also giving you a special treat. I won a cover in a contest and decided to have it made up for Imprint, on the off chance that I may one day release the story on its on. Enjoy!
I present an excerpt taken from my short story Imprint, part of the Tales from the SFR Brigade - a free scifi romance anthology. Having been rescued from a rather nasty fate by Deluvian Marshall Tevik who'd been pursuing her, my thief Jiona has woken up in what might seem a compromising situation at first assessment...
“Care to explain why I’m half-naked in your bed?”
“Care to explain why I’m half-naked in your bed?”
Tevik quirked an eyebrow and perched beside her on the edge of the mattress, still keeping out of reach. “My bed, because there was nowhere else to put you. And as for your clothing…” He had the grace to look sheepish. “Strip search. After that trick in the vaults with the knife…” With one hand he gestured to a long, dark bruise over his ribs that matched those on the opposite side from where she’d kicked him. She flinched. “I couldn’t be sure what else you might have tucked away.”
“Bet you enjoyed searching me.”
A faint blush colored his cheeks. “I did what I had to do, for my own safety as much as yours. I didn’t want any booby traps going off in your outfit. You are known for them.”
She smirked. “Thought I might have a weapon tucked away in my panties?”
His blush deepened. Her panties had been little more than a strand of lace. Less restrictive, but certainly no cover for a weapon. Not even a very small one.
“With you, anything is possible.”
Jiona laughed. “Ah, now there’s a reputation I can be proud of!”8 free SFR short stories in 1 WEBSITE | GOODREADS Available for FREE from... Amazon | Smashwords ARe | B&N | Kobo iTunes | Diesel Books |
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Friday, August 21, 2015
SCREEN ENVY: WHY CAN'T WE CAPTURE THAT SF MOVIE AUDIENCE?
The usual suspects dominated the screen this summer. |
Another summer of screen blockbusters is
nearly over and once again the multiplex has been dominated by comic book
heroes, post-apocalyptic survivors and teen warriors of the future. Though romance
has been generally lacking in these action-packed thrill rides, science fiction
has certainly been featured, even in the speculative nature of disaster movies
like SAN ANDREAS.
The small screen, too, is full of SF—from the
SYFY Channel’s more traditional space opera KILLJOYS to ABC’s Earth-based THE
WHISPERS. There’s even a soap opera about
space (ABC’s THE ASTRONAUT’S WIVES CLUB, about the women behind the men of the
Mercury space program).
Obviously Hollywood thinks SF sells. What’s
so appealing about the genre for film and television?
--SF is visual. Spaceships! Monsters!
Disasters! The end of the world! Superheroes and arch villains battling it out
in the middle of cities, destroying everything! Cool tech and even cooler
special effects and makeup. The guys (and, make no mistake, they are
overwhelmingly male) on the technical side of filmmaking love this stuff and
delight in one-upping each other. No other genre gives them the same
opportunities.
--SF lends itself to simple plots. Good guys
vs. bad guys. Monsters/aliens vs. humans. Superhero vs. super villain. Etc. The exceptions
to this rule in the last few years can be numbered on maybe two hands—GRAVITY,
INTERSTELLAR, HER, LUCY, a few others. They get lost in the avalanche of
mindless fare at the multiplex and, with the exception of the first two titles,
are seen by only a handful of dedicated SF film fans. Simple is best,
especially on the big screen. More room for explosions. (Television fares
better in this regard, since paying for big effects is a problem for TV
networks. A show like DEFIANCE or PERSON OF INTEREST can focus on relationships
and ideas and find a faithful audience on the small screen.)
--SF skews young. The majority of the
movie-going audience today consists of teenagers and young adults. (People like
me, who can remember when comic books were not an art form, but something you
could buy for a dime at the corner drug store, tend to watch movies at home.) This
audience is most likely to be drawn to stories and heroes taken from the media
it is already familiar with—comics and graphic novels, television, retro
movies, young adult science fiction bestsellers like The Hunger Games and its clones.
--SF skews male. Yes, I know, dear reader,
many of you are female and love SF, too, but Hollywood doesn’t much care about
that. The powers that be have convinced themselves that men drive the
entertainment decisions—including what gets seen on date night and what
is watched on TV or computer or tablet. Hollywood has decided (presumably by
market research, but who knows?) that, with some exceptions, “audiences” don’t want to see women in
lead roles, they don’t want films by or about
women, and they damn sure don’t want films in which women play the heroes. Science fiction, in which, traditionally, the men dominate, gives Hollywood what they think they
want—and lots of it. The percentage of women starring in, directing, producing
and writing movies and television has actually dropped since the 1990’s. We can only hope the success of films
like MAD MAX:FURY ROAD (starring the mesmerizing Charlize Theron) will change
some minds.
In the SFR community we have long hoped that
the trending love for SF on the screen will open a door for us with both readers
and the not-so-Invisible-Hand of the market. But that has not happened so far,
and I fear it will never happen. The problem is that the science fiction we see
onscreen--certainly the SF we see on the big screen, though to a lesser extent
the SF we see on TV--has little similarity to the kind of SF we are writing. In
general, our stories are much more diverse, female-centered, character-driven
and complex than the majority of stories we see in the multiplex. Then, of
course, there’s the romance, which is most often only hinted at in the theater.
We have assumed all along that the audience
for SF on the screen is the same as the audience for SFR in readable form, or
at least that there is a great deal of crossover. That’s based on the anecdotal
evidence that lots of us like SF movies and read SFR, too. We need to determine
whether the majority of the movie-going audience is really open to what we’re selling,
and, if so, how do we reach that audience? If our basic assumption is not true
about this film/SFR connection, then who are we really writing for? The answer
has to be greater than “people like us,” lest we continue to sell books to only
each other.
I don’t have the answer to
these questions. If I did, I’d be Number One on Amazon. But if any of you has
some insight, I beg you to share.
Cheers, Donna
Thursday, August 20, 2015
What is it about Star Wars?
I really enjoyed Donna's post about the best and worst things about Star Trek. It got me thinking about that series, and also, of course, Star Wars. I'm not a Trekky. I fondly remember the first series, way back in the late 60's, but the increasingly silly plots starring Captain Kirk and the Roman goddesses etc put me off. I've seen a few of the movies, but never got sucked back into the TV series.
Star Wars was a whole nother proposition altogether. I thoroughly enjoyed Star Wars: A New Hope back in '77, fell in love with The Empire Strikes Back, and although Return of the Jedi didn't grab me to the same extent, I was sad when the series finished. Sad enough to embrace Timothy Zahn's Thrawn trilogy when it appeared. I saw all three prequel movies several times. Because... well... it's Star Wars. (Yes, I know they were bad) And I'm hangin' out for episode VII.
So why Star Wars (SW) and not Star Trek (ST)?
There's no doubt Trek is science fiction. The science has always been better in ST than SW, and I am a hard SF fan. I will happily accept that SW is space opera and that it has more than a dollop of magic (the Force). Take it down to the bare roots and it's a classic fairytale, complete with black-clad villain, a beautiful princess, the wise old wizard, a world-weary paladin and a kid with a destiny. Ho hum, seen it all before? Maybe. There were a few smart little variations, though. The Imperial soldiers wear white armour, the princess isn't exactly the shy, retiring type, and there are aliens - non-humanoid, interesting aliens. Then it turns out the REAL villain isn't the guy in the death mask, it's the puppeteer pulling the strings.
And special effects.
George Lucas spent a lot of money on special effects back in the days when it wasn't all done by a roomful of coke-fueled software engineers. I loved that stuff. I loved hearing about how they filmed the space battles, the attack on the Death Star, the crash on Dagobah: how they built the wonderful star destroyers. etc etc. I suppose I got my geek fix from the SFX details. The USS Enterprise was good, and it has evolved over the years. But for me, it will never compare with the mighty Imperial Star Destroyer. Visually, anyway. The very vulnerable bridge is an obvious design flaw.
I think that mix of science fiction and magic is why Star Wars has continued to suck in a younger audience. The bookshops and toy stores are full of Star Wars merchandise aimed at kids who are probably too young to even remember the prequel trilogy. Certainly Star Wars: Rebels is aimed at a new audience - even if us older types can still enjoy it. I think that's wonderful. If Star Wars can get kids reading, get them looking up at the stars and wondering, if it leads them to watch Cosmos, to ask questions about aliens - then Let the Force Be With Them.
*The picture is of a model I built of the snow speeder crashed on Hoth. Luke is climbing out as the ATAT advances. Yes, I'm a geek.
Star Wars was a whole nother proposition altogether. I thoroughly enjoyed Star Wars: A New Hope back in '77, fell in love with The Empire Strikes Back, and although Return of the Jedi didn't grab me to the same extent, I was sad when the series finished. Sad enough to embrace Timothy Zahn's Thrawn trilogy when it appeared. I saw all three prequel movies several times. Because... well... it's Star Wars. (Yes, I know they were bad) And I'm hangin' out for episode VII.
So why Star Wars (SW) and not Star Trek (ST)?
There's no doubt Trek is science fiction. The science has always been better in ST than SW, and I am a hard SF fan. I will happily accept that SW is space opera and that it has more than a dollop of magic (the Force). Take it down to the bare roots and it's a classic fairytale, complete with black-clad villain, a beautiful princess, the wise old wizard, a world-weary paladin and a kid with a destiny. Ho hum, seen it all before? Maybe. There were a few smart little variations, though. The Imperial soldiers wear white armour, the princess isn't exactly the shy, retiring type, and there are aliens - non-humanoid, interesting aliens. Then it turns out the REAL villain isn't the guy in the death mask, it's the puppeteer pulling the strings.
And special effects.
George Lucas spent a lot of money on special effects back in the days when it wasn't all done by a roomful of coke-fueled software engineers. I loved that stuff. I loved hearing about how they filmed the space battles, the attack on the Death Star, the crash on Dagobah: how they built the wonderful star destroyers. etc etc. I suppose I got my geek fix from the SFX details. The USS Enterprise was good, and it has evolved over the years. But for me, it will never compare with the mighty Imperial Star Destroyer. Visually, anyway. The very vulnerable bridge is an obvious design flaw.
I think that mix of science fiction and magic is why Star Wars has continued to suck in a younger audience. The bookshops and toy stores are full of Star Wars merchandise aimed at kids who are probably too young to even remember the prequel trilogy. Certainly Star Wars: Rebels is aimed at a new audience - even if us older types can still enjoy it. I think that's wonderful. If Star Wars can get kids reading, get them looking up at the stars and wondering, if it leads them to watch Cosmos, to ask questions about aliens - then Let the Force Be With Them.
*The picture is of a model I built of the snow speeder crashed on Hoth. Luke is climbing out as the ATAT advances. Yes, I'm a geek.
Tuesday, August 18, 2015
Tuesday Teaser - Demons on the Streets of the Future #urbanfantasy #futuristic
My summer book binge with my monsters continues, and while I keep reading, here's another excerpt for you to read. This is taken from my futuristic urban fantasy No Angel, where supernatural beings still roam the Earth, and other planets too...
He stalked the streets of the city, the part that he had an unspoken
claim on. Around him, those few humans venturing into the cold, wet weather
walked with silver rain sticks in their raised hands, the buzz of invisible
energy umbrellas keeping them dry. Beams of light from flying vehicles criss-crossed
the clouded sky above. The odd blaring of collision warnings or irate drivers
too impatient to wait their turn at the aerial stop signs broke the incessant
hum of traffic. Towers and gothic arches in black marble and black glass
surrounded him, glinting in the bright gleam of lurid neons. Mirrored panels reflected
the 3D adverts that would spring up in front of commuters, like pranksters
leaping out of hiding. Lucien strode through them all as they tried to seduce
him with the latest social drug, eating place, bar, or males and females
available for company. Next, it offered things to increase his libido, at which
he laughed, then cosmetic alterations to enhance his appearance. Lucien
snorted. As an angel, he'd been beautiful. As a demon, he'd kept his looks, but
his demonic nature had sharpened his high cheekbones and narrowed his face,
turned his already dark skin a shade darker. He could class himself as drop
dead gorgeous and appreciate the utter literal nature of the phrase.
When that failed, the ads tried targeting him with off-world travel as
they followed him around. Lucien smiled. He already belonged to another world
that most humans might have forgotten they could reach. Little did they know it
would still be their final destination.
At last, even the holographic advertising left him alone. Contrary to
what humanity might think, the supernatural beings of this world had adapted to
technology, if somewhat more slowly than their mortal cousins. There were
demons on the outer planets too, and new versions of Hell that linked them to
the original to ensure the sinners still met the fate they deserved. Crossing
space was no defense from supernatural beings who could cross dimensions as yet
unknown and unexplored by the human race.
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Friday, August 14, 2015
THE 5 BEST AND WORST THINGS ABOUT STAR TREK
Daughter Jessie hangs with the Klingons |
I had a blast last weekend playing the part
of Big Time Author at the Shore Leave Science Fiction Convention in Hunt
Valley, Maryland. I signed books at the Meet the Pros event and in the Dealers’
Room, geeked out at a session with DEFIANCE stars Jaime Murray, Tony Curran and
Jesse Rath (the love-to-hate-’em Tarr family) and sat on three pro panels with
other authors.
I had the most fun at one of those panels:
The Best and Worst of STAR TREK and STAR WARS. The panel was originally
supposed to be a Battle Royale between fans of the various TREK incarnations, in
which I am always prepared to defend
The Original Series above all others. But an overabundance of panels meant we
had to combine ours with one about the best and worst of STAR WARS. Which meant
we ended up with fans of the two largest
franchises in SF history in the same room. Anyone unfamiliar with SF might be naïve
enough to ask why that is a problem. (Mundanes often confuse the two anyway.) Anyone else knows to batten the hatches.
Well, it’s not like the old days. Everyone
played nice and left the bat’leths and
light sabers at home. Many of the writers on the panel had written pro novels
in both universes. But it did give me an idea for this blog.
So, here, IMHO, are my five best and worst
things about TREK:
BEST
--Characterization. In particular, Kirk,
Spock and McCoy are the Holy Trinity of characters, representing, depending on
your perspective, Mind, Body, Spirit; Id, Ego, Superego; Thesis, Argument,
Synthesis; Physical, Emotional, Rational. Need I go on?
--Technology. The special effects might have
been less than stellar in the early going, but you can’t discount the
inspirational effect of TREK’s tech. The communicator is now in everyone’s
hands because a guy who watched that show wanted to make it happen and invented
the cell phone. NASA, computer labs, biotech firms and engineering companies
everywhere are full of people who grew up on TREK and want to see that stuff become
reality.
--Vision. And talk about inspiration. Not
just the tech, but the kind of world we want to create, with a bridge full of
diversity and a mission to explore, not dominate.
--Adult Perspective. This may seem a strange
quality to praise in a show that has spawned generations of cosplaying,
action-figure-collecting fans, but the concerns of TREK are not coming-of-age,
finding our true roles in life, accepting/rejecting our fathers’ choices or any
of the other concerns of young adults. They are more about accepting the “evil”
that may be part of us, negotiating difficult relationships with others,
leading men and women through impossible hardships, the immediacy of war vs.
the delicacy of diplomacy, the nature of love, responsibility, duty, friendship.
(Let’s hope J.J. Abrams remembers this before it’s too late.)
Picard and Dathon at El-Adrel |
--“Darmok”.
One of the best episodes in TREK comes not from TOS, but from NEXT
GENERATION in “Darmok.” Captain Picard and the Enterprise
encounter an alien culture that communicates entirely in allegorical phrases,
negating the ability of the translator to help them bridge the communication
gap. This episode stands out because the aliens in it truly think differently.
And for once, TREK’s tech is of no use; only the human ability to make an
intuitive leap saves the day. Kirk would have been proud.
WORST
--Wesley Crusher. See “Adult Perspective”
above. The presence of Wesley on the bridge seriously disrupted the TREK force.
Chekov came close to this annoying role in TOS, but he was older, and everyone
had permission to ignore or abuse him.
--Similarly, anytime there were children on
TOS Enterprise, trouble—and bad
acting--ensued. “And The Children Shall Lead” comes to mind.
--Cheesy effects. We all know they did the
best they could on TOS, but sometimes you just have to close your eyes and
ears. And, seriously, if the turbulence is that bad, couldn’t you just install
seat belts? So many bodies on the bridge!
--ENTERPRISE. Almost everything about it. I
love Scott Bakula, but he was seriously miscast in this murky “prequel” to TOS.
We went nowhere and we did it tentatively, hounded by Starfleet Command back
home and the interfering Vulcans along the way.
--Hippies in space. (“Journey to Paradise”
TOS) Abuse of the holodeck (multiple epidsodes TNG,VOY). Ferengies. (DS9) Impenetrable
politics. (DS9) Sorry, I couldn’t decide which was worse.
So, what do YOU say? What are the best and
worst of TREK in your opinion?
And, since I’m not a huge STAR WARS fan, I
leave it up to our resident STAR WARrior, Laurie, to give us her list of the
best and worst of SW. I can just kick it
off by offering my best—Han Solo—and worst—JarJar Binks—may he be encased in
carbon forever.
Cheers, Donna
Thursday, August 13, 2015
Life on Mars? We'd like to think so...
The red planet has fascinated us Earthlings for many years. I watched John Carter just a few weeks ago. I kno, I know. But I prefer to wait for the DVD, you see. Anyway, it was a fun movie, with the intrepid American adventurer finding himself on far off Barsoom fighting for a Martian princess. And in the end, of course, love conquers all.
It was altogether a more comfortable experience than The War of the Worlds, H.G. Wells's turn of the last century masterpiece. It has been filmed many times, with varying degrees of success.
Of course, now we know that the Martian canals don't exist, that Barsoom is fiction, and that the octopus-like aliens in their tripod machines came from one man's imagination. So far, we haven't even confirmed a microbe on Mars.
But we just can't let it go. Humans recognise patterns. Pareidolia is probably a hard-wired defence mechanism, very useful for primitive man. These days, it tends to manifest as seeing people where there aren't any. The man in the moon is one example. If you clicked on the link to pareidolia you will have found the reference to the face on Mars. Naturally, that one had the plot bunnies up and running, and a movie was made (Mission to Mars - not one that made it to the Oscar nominations). The real explanation for the face is rather more prosaic.
Now we have a new example - the ghostly woman on Mars. It seems the UFO-hunters are freaking out. Maybe the princess on Barsoom is real? It doesn't take a very vivid imagination to come up with a plot incorporating the lady. Perhaps a sentinel warning off the alien invaders. Maybe there's something underground that triggered a hologram when the rover came too near? Or... ooh ooh ... perhaps it's a welcoming committee?
What do you think?
It was altogether a more comfortable experience than The War of the Worlds, H.G. Wells's turn of the last century masterpiece. It has been filmed many times, with varying degrees of success.
Of course, now we know that the Martian canals don't exist, that Barsoom is fiction, and that the octopus-like aliens in their tripod machines came from one man's imagination. So far, we haven't even confirmed a microbe on Mars.
But we just can't let it go. Humans recognise patterns. Pareidolia is probably a hard-wired defence mechanism, very useful for primitive man. These days, it tends to manifest as seeing people where there aren't any. The man in the moon is one example. If you clicked on the link to pareidolia you will have found the reference to the face on Mars. Naturally, that one had the plot bunnies up and running, and a movie was made (Mission to Mars - not one that made it to the Oscar nominations). The real explanation for the face is rather more prosaic.
Now we have a new example - the ghostly woman on Mars. It seems the UFO-hunters are freaking out. Maybe the princess on Barsoom is real? It doesn't take a very vivid imagination to come up with a plot incorporating the lady. Perhaps a sentinel warning off the alien invaders. Maybe there's something underground that triggered a hologram when the rover came too near? Or... ooh ooh ... perhaps it's a welcoming committee?
What do you think?
Tuesday, August 11, 2015
Tuesday Teaser - Cajun #Zombie Problems #YA #paranormal
While I continue with my summer book binge and spending time with my three monsters, here's another excerpt and featuring an altogether different kind of monster. Here, my teen zombie hero Luke as passed out in the swamp after an encounter with a weird black shadow that's been following him around. But the shadow's no longer the problem...
I can hear the frogs. Above me, the moon is so fiercely white and full, it hurts my eyes. It's also jerking across the sky between the branches of the cypress like someone's hauling on the leash of a disobedient hound. I frown at it, and then realize it ain't the moon moving. It's me. Something's got a hold of my leg and is dragging me along.
Glancing down sets me yelling. A gator has my right ankle in its jaws as it pulls me down to the river. A small one as alligators go and probably why he hasn't dug himself a hole in the mud to hibernate. I guess he's planning to stick me under a log until I rot and tenderize a little more. But I ain't planning to end up in his stomach. Not when I might still be conscious all the way through digestion.
I twist and latch onto a nearby tree. I'm so slick with mud that sheer strength and bloody minded stubbornness are all that keep me clinging on.
My resistance earns me a growling from the gator, and he yanks all the harder on my foot until I can hear my joints popping as they threaten to snap. He shakes his head, hoping to break my hold, and my damn fingers slip. I feel things parting in my ankle. Shit, I can't afford to lose my foot. I let go of the tree but I kick him in the head with my free leg, hard enough that he lets go. Most gators wouldn't give up a meal so lightly, but I hit a damn site too forceful to be classed as easy. He growls and goes for another bite, but my next kick breaks his jaw. Bleeding, several teeth missing, he scuttles away into the river, more than his pride hurt. I sit and stare until the ripples he made smooth out into stillness. Then I check the damage.
His teeth have gone deep, leaving a pretty pattern and some of my flesh torn. I don't have nothing to patch it up, and I don't much care. I've lost Annabelle. I should have just let the gator take me.
I can hear the frogs. Above me, the moon is so fiercely white and full, it hurts my eyes. It's also jerking across the sky between the branches of the cypress like someone's hauling on the leash of a disobedient hound. I frown at it, and then realize it ain't the moon moving. It's me. Something's got a hold of my leg and is dragging me along.
Glancing down sets me yelling. A gator has my right ankle in its jaws as it pulls me down to the river. A small one as alligators go and probably why he hasn't dug himself a hole in the mud to hibernate. I guess he's planning to stick me under a log until I rot and tenderize a little more. But I ain't planning to end up in his stomach. Not when I might still be conscious all the way through digestion.
I twist and latch onto a nearby tree. I'm so slick with mud that sheer strength and bloody minded stubbornness are all that keep me clinging on.
My resistance earns me a growling from the gator, and he yanks all the harder on my foot until I can hear my joints popping as they threaten to snap. He shakes his head, hoping to break my hold, and my damn fingers slip. I feel things parting in my ankle. Shit, I can't afford to lose my foot. I let go of the tree but I kick him in the head with my free leg, hard enough that he lets go. Most gators wouldn't give up a meal so lightly, but I hit a damn site too forceful to be classed as easy. He growls and goes for another bite, but my next kick breaks his jaw. Bleeding, several teeth missing, he scuttles away into the river, more than his pride hurt. I sit and stare until the ripples he made smooth out into stillness. Then I check the damage.
His teeth have gone deep, leaving a pretty pattern and some of my flesh torn. I don't have nothing to patch it up, and I don't much care. I've lost Annabelle. I should have just let the gator take me.
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Monday, August 10, 2015
When Influence Lingers: Post-Mortem Characters
This week, I'd like to take a look at something that's general not associated with Science Fiction Romance.
Ghosts.
Not all ghosts are banished to the Paranormal realm in fiction. Sometimes the most influential characters in a novel, other than the MCs themselves, are those of the departed. And sometimes the lingering presence of the departed plays a very big part in SF/R.
Think about it.
Luke Skywalker destroyed the Death Star when the spirit of Obi Wan Kenobi told him to "use the Force, Luke!"
In Contact, Dr. Ellen Arroway becomes obsessed with the stars and "really big antennas" because of her deep grief at the loss of her father-mentor, who taught her about astronomy and ham radios at a young age.
The obscure backstory in Aliens (cut from the original movie, but touched on in the extended version) revealed that Ripley, driven by grief and guilt over the death of her daughter--a daughter she had last seen at age 10, who had matured and died during Ripley's 57-year stasis aboard the drifting Nostromo shuttle--resulting in her strong maternal bond with Rebecca "Newt" Jorden, a young survivor of the alien-infested LV-426.
Let's take a closer look at how strongly the dead can influence the living.
A Post-Mortem Character (PMC) is often someone who was close to the character, a relative, friend, or teacher. Or they could also be an idol (Elvis, Princess Di) or a person of political or cultural influence (Martin Luther King, Mother Theresa) or someone they admired…or despised. Any departed soul who is in a position to influence a character’s life, decisions, actions or plans could be a PMC. They can take an active role in the plot, taking on personality traits through flashbacks, memories, dreams or interaction with living characters. Or they can take a passive role through the living character’s thoughts. The influence of PMCs can take many forms.
The Mentor. The PMC can act as an active voice that lingers, guiding the character with their remembered wisdom. The character maintains a dialogue with the Mentor, whether real or imagined. The character might hear The Mentor’s voice in their head, see them in dreams or visions, or ask what would you, [insert name of dearly departed PMC], do in this situation? The aforementioned Obi Wan Kenobi was a Mentor PMC. Another example is in The Outback Stars. When Sergeant Terry Myell is close to death he is visited by his mother who calls him by his special name—Jungali—and gives him hints about the choices he must make.
The Inspiration. The character is compelled to complete a journey the PMC began, but could not complete themselves due to death. A son who takes up his father’s sword and vows to finish his quest is a common theme, sword being a symbolic word for cause. Although similar to a Mentor, there is no imaginary dialogue between the character and the PMC, but the PMC’s influence is evident by the character’s motivation. In Inherit the Stars, not only are Zaviar Mennelsohn's son, daughter and brother compelled to carry out his great vision, but the entire consortium called "The Network."
The Conscience. The PMC’s memory prompts the character to do things or make choices that would make the PMC proud, etc. This is probably the most universal and passive PMC influence. My father always told me to… My mother wanted me to be… What would my grandmother think if she knew I…
The Reshaper. The grief of the PMCs passing results in life-altering changes in the character. The character might move away, change their lifestyle, because of--or to avoid facing--the memory of the departed one. The death of Duke Leto Atreides in Dune sends his young son Paul into exile, where he raises an unlikely army of Fremen in the quest to avenge his father’s murder.
The Lingerer. This sort of PMC may incite the opposite effect of a Reshaper when the character holds on to their memories too tightly, whether or not he/she should, and this also causes life-altering events or conflict. In Ann Aguirre’s Grimspace, navigator March is affected by the memory of his late Grimspace navigator/partner, while his new navigator, Sirantha Jax, still stings from the loss of her own pilot/partner/lover, Kai, a situation that causes a rift between them and threatens their freshly minted do-it-or-die alliance.
The Reverser. Not all PMCs are someone admired. Another aspect of a PMC affecting a character is when they vow not to behave like the departed, not to make the same mistakes, or carry the same negative traits. In contrast to a Reshaper who sends the MC off in a different direction or spurs them to begin their initial quest, a Reverser sends the character into gear-slamming reverse. In this case, the PMC lives on as an example of what not to do. Though it's not SF/R, a classic example might be The Lord of the Ring's Aragorn and his determination not to fall prey to his ancestor's (Isildur's) weakness in failing to destroy The One Ring.
The Haunter. This PMC can have the effect of the Mentor, Inspiration, or Conscience but they do so more directly—through fear. They mentally or physically haunt the character with lingering nightmares, apparitions or poltergeist activities. They may be adversaries, villains, abusers, or victims, but not always. The tone is threatening, but not all Haunters are evil. In the motion picture Dragonfly, the deceased wife of the MC haunts her husband through her former child patients and household objects, goading him to take a journey to South America to discover something very precious that he believed lost—their infant daughter.
In a twist on the PMC, the characters themselves may already be deceased, but that fact is concealed until the shocker ending when their lingering influence on others is revealed. In fact, this isn’t all that rare. Do these movie titles sound familiar? The Sixth Sense. The Others.
Have you read a recent SF/R that has a PMC? If so, let us know the title and what form of influence the PMC had on a central character.
Now, here’s the real challenge. Can you think of a major novel or motion picture that didn’t have a character somehow affected by a PMC influence?
Good luck with that. ;)
Have a great week.
Ghosts.
Not all ghosts are banished to the Paranormal realm in fiction. Sometimes the most influential characters in a novel, other than the MCs themselves, are those of the departed. And sometimes the lingering presence of the departed plays a very big part in SF/R.
Think about it.
Luke Skywalker destroyed the Death Star when the spirit of Obi Wan Kenobi told him to "use the Force, Luke!"
In Contact, Dr. Ellen Arroway becomes obsessed with the stars and "really big antennas" because of her deep grief at the loss of her father-mentor, who taught her about astronomy and ham radios at a young age.
The obscure backstory in Aliens (cut from the original movie, but touched on in the extended version) revealed that Ripley, driven by grief and guilt over the death of her daughter--a daughter she had last seen at age 10, who had matured and died during Ripley's 57-year stasis aboard the drifting Nostromo shuttle--resulting in her strong maternal bond with Rebecca "Newt" Jorden, a young survivor of the alien-infested LV-426.
Let's take a closer look at how strongly the dead can influence the living.
A Post-Mortem Character (PMC) is often someone who was close to the character, a relative, friend, or teacher. Or they could also be an idol (Elvis, Princess Di) or a person of political or cultural influence (Martin Luther King, Mother Theresa) or someone they admired…or despised. Any departed soul who is in a position to influence a character’s life, decisions, actions or plans could be a PMC. They can take an active role in the plot, taking on personality traits through flashbacks, memories, dreams or interaction with living characters. Or they can take a passive role through the living character’s thoughts. The influence of PMCs can take many forms.
The Mentor. The PMC can act as an active voice that lingers, guiding the character with their remembered wisdom. The character maintains a dialogue with the Mentor, whether real or imagined. The character might hear The Mentor’s voice in their head, see them in dreams or visions, or ask what would you, [insert name of dearly departed PMC], do in this situation? The aforementioned Obi Wan Kenobi was a Mentor PMC. Another example is in The Outback Stars. When Sergeant Terry Myell is close to death he is visited by his mother who calls him by his special name—Jungali—and gives him hints about the choices he must make.
The Inspiration. The character is compelled to complete a journey the PMC began, but could not complete themselves due to death. A son who takes up his father’s sword and vows to finish his quest is a common theme, sword being a symbolic word for cause. Although similar to a Mentor, there is no imaginary dialogue between the character and the PMC, but the PMC’s influence is evident by the character’s motivation. In Inherit the Stars, not only are Zaviar Mennelsohn's son, daughter and brother compelled to carry out his great vision, but the entire consortium called "The Network."
The Conscience. The PMC’s memory prompts the character to do things or make choices that would make the PMC proud, etc. This is probably the most universal and passive PMC influence. My father always told me to… My mother wanted me to be… What would my grandmother think if she knew I…
The Reshaper. The grief of the PMCs passing results in life-altering changes in the character. The character might move away, change their lifestyle, because of--or to avoid facing--the memory of the departed one. The death of Duke Leto Atreides in Dune sends his young son Paul into exile, where he raises an unlikely army of Fremen in the quest to avenge his father’s murder.
The Lingerer. This sort of PMC may incite the opposite effect of a Reshaper when the character holds on to their memories too tightly, whether or not he/she should, and this also causes life-altering events or conflict. In Ann Aguirre’s Grimspace, navigator March is affected by the memory of his late Grimspace navigator/partner, while his new navigator, Sirantha Jax, still stings from the loss of her own pilot/partner/lover, Kai, a situation that causes a rift between them and threatens their freshly minted do-it-or-die alliance.
The Reverser. Not all PMCs are someone admired. Another aspect of a PMC affecting a character is when they vow not to behave like the departed, not to make the same mistakes, or carry the same negative traits. In contrast to a Reshaper who sends the MC off in a different direction or spurs them to begin their initial quest, a Reverser sends the character into gear-slamming reverse. In this case, the PMC lives on as an example of what not to do. Though it's not SF/R, a classic example might be The Lord of the Ring's Aragorn and his determination not to fall prey to his ancestor's (Isildur's) weakness in failing to destroy The One Ring.
The Haunter. This PMC can have the effect of the Mentor, Inspiration, or Conscience but they do so more directly—through fear. They mentally or physically haunt the character with lingering nightmares, apparitions or poltergeist activities. They may be adversaries, villains, abusers, or victims, but not always. The tone is threatening, but not all Haunters are evil. In the motion picture Dragonfly, the deceased wife of the MC haunts her husband through her former child patients and household objects, goading him to take a journey to South America to discover something very precious that he believed lost—their infant daughter.
In a twist on the PMC, the characters themselves may already be deceased, but that fact is concealed until the shocker ending when their lingering influence on others is revealed. In fact, this isn’t all that rare. Do these movie titles sound familiar? The Sixth Sense. The Others.
Have you read a recent SF/R that has a PMC? If so, let us know the title and what form of influence the PMC had on a central character.
Now, here’s the real challenge. Can you think of a major novel or motion picture that didn’t have a character somehow affected by a PMC influence?
Good luck with that. ;)
Have a great week.
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