Here in the mountains of Western North
Carolina it’s still the dead of winter. The wind blows cold across the ridge,
rattling dead branches and ruffling yellowed grasses. A few dry beans remain in
the bottom of the jar, collected every time there was a foggy morning in
August, each one a harbinger of snow before winter is out. What gravel there
was on Snowbird Road, our connection to the outside world, is buried under four
inches of slippery muck, which freezes into ruts when the temperature drops and
thaws again into a muddy mess when the sun hits it.
Despite Paxutauny Phil’s dire prediction of
six more weeks of this, there are already signs of spring. Yesterday, a flock
of robins covered my back yard, digging for sustenance in the semi-frozen
earth. Certain slender young red oaks have begun to blush slightly ruddy
against the hillsides, not exactly budding, but somehow preparing for a change.
And the birds, silent since late September, have begun to sing in the thin
sunshine.
Winter, soon to be spring. And the book I
just wrote, planning to release in November, is set in winter. Only now, due to
circumstances beyond my control, Not Fade
Away, Interstellar Rescue Book 4, will be released in spring—April 10, to
be exact. All my lovely descriptions of snow in the mountains, of bare branches
and icicles and bitter winds, will be completely wasted on readers basking in
the sun at the beach. Arrggh!
I suppose I could do a quick rewrite to
change all the weather-related setting stuff. But I would invariably miss
something in the rush to re-do the manuscript, which has been edited and
formatted already. Besides, believe it or not, I already changed the setting
once, early on, realizing when the original release date would put the book.
Those of you who set your books completely
onboard starships are sniggering right now. No seasons to worry about for you!
And, if you set your book on some other planet, who knows what their seasons
are like, right? Yeah, I get it, it’s my fault if I set a large part of my
books on Earth. Seasons come with the
territory.
The question becomes how much readers really
care about the predominant season they’re reading about. I’m re-reading Diana
Galbadon’s excellent Outlander series, and her descriptions are so detailed
you could never lose track of what time of year you’re in. Beautiful—and accurate—lists
of bird calls and wildflowers and weather patterns. Then, again, she covers an
entire year within the span of a few chapters, so you can’t get too attached to
a particular season, no matter how beguiling. The setting is important—whether
it’s Scotland, the West Indies or North Carolina—but the plot and the
characters are so compelling that you just have to keep reading.
I have to hope that will be the case for Not Fade Away, too. Otherwise, my
readers will be forced to crank up the air conditioner and pull down the shades
in the warm months to set the proper wintry mood.
Cheers, Donna
I wouldn't worry too much about what season the book is set in vs. what season it's being read in. At least, putting on my reader hat, I really don't mind unless I'm intentionally looking for a seasonal book--which really doesn't happen much for this reader.
ReplyDeleteI think what is important is that you took the time to paint the season with the kind of setting and sensory detail that readers can relish.
And hurray for the upcoming release of Book 4 in your series! *throws confetti*
I'm with Laurie on this one. Besides, where I live (here on Earth) we NEVER get bare branches, freezing mud and icicles. I enjoyed reading your post just for the description, Beautiful, atmospheric stuff.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the words of encouragement, y'all. That does make me feel a bit better about my baby's delayed release. (I won't actually throw that confetti until I get the book in my hands, though, Laurie. The whole project's been snakebit!) But thank you for the compliments, Greta. Winter may not be fun to experience around here, but it can be fun to describe!
ReplyDeleteDonna, I don't think this matters AT ALL. In fact, I just read a book about a marine biology student on an educational cruise in the Caribbean. I read it sitting next to my fireplace wrapped in my favorite shawl, while it was raining so hard I didn't even want to go outside to let out my chickens. I could almost feel the sun on my face, and it was wonderful! I wouldn't give it a second thought.
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