The construction of a series is always a
complicated task, involving a growing ensemble cast and a multitude of bit
players. My SFR Interstellar Rescue
series has certainly been no exception, the world I’m building becoming more
detailed as I go along. I’m discovering, too, that some of my newer cast
members need more than a little bit of “wrangling.”
My latest novel, Not Fade Away, Interstellar Rescue Book 4 (on
pre-order now on Amazon), stars some familiar characters from my previous books in addition
to my new romantic couple, Rescue agent Rafe Gordon and home care nurse Charlie
McIntyre. That was difficult enough to pull off. But a few unique secondary
characters in this book took special handling to get just right on the page.
Happy, the therapy
dog. I introduced Happy in a previous
blog post here on Spacefreighters. He was a lot of
fun to write, but he was a character in his own right, too, with his own
consistent personality and behavior based on his breed and background. I wanted
to make sure Happy acted like a real dog,
not a Hollywood idea of a dog. I asked my friend Beki Weight, who has years of
dog training and fostering experience, to read my manuscript. Her input was
invaluable in molding Happy into a believable character.
Del Gordon, father of
the hero. The premise
of Not Fade Away is that Rescue agent
Rafe Gordon must bring his father, legendary alien fighter Del, now suffering
from dementia, to Earth to hide him from alien assassins. Depicting Del in a
respectful, yet realistic, way was not easy.
I was acutely aware every minute I spent
with Del that many of my readers deal with this challenge every day in real
life, caring for mothers and fathers, husbands and wives with the heartbreak of
Alzheimers, of other forms of dementia, or of traumatic brain injury. To get it
right, I did as much research as I could on the specific form of dementia that
affects Del (Lewy Body—characterized especially by hallucinations, which figure
in the story), and I drew on my years of experience teaching chi gung to
dementia patients and assisted-living residents.
BiN, a sentient
computer. At least for Happy or the elderly Del I
only had to worry about characterization from the outside. That is, I didn’t
attempt to write from either the dog’s POV or the elderly Del’s. (There is
extensive flashback material from Del’s younger
perspective, though, from a time when his mind was intact.)
Building a POV for the character of BiN, the
sentient computer, was necessary, since no one else knows what BiN knows of the
story. The creature/machine doesn’t become sentient all at once. Like a child,
it develops a sense of itself gradually as it accumulates information. And as
it accumulates even more information and becomes more curious, it acquires a
sense of ethics and morality, a development that was never contemplated or
expected by its creators. That’s a major twist in the plot, so must come from
BiN’s POV. I had to make it believable, which I just have to hope it is. Not
being a programmer, I faked it pretty hard, but real programming language would
probably have sent every other reader to sleep within seconds!
The good thing about writing challenges is
that they make for an exciting reading experience in the end. Pre-order your
copy of Not Fade Away, Interstellar
Rescue Series Book 4 today so you’ll be ready
to experience it June 12!
Earth shielded
his secrets--
Until her love unlocked his
heart.
Rescue agent Rafe Gordon is human, though
Earth has never been his home. But when his legendary father Del becomes the
target of alien assassins, Rafe must hide the dementia-debilitated hero in the
small mountain town where the old man was born—Masey, North Carolina, USA, Earth.
Home care nurse Charlie McIntyre and her
therapy dog, Happy, have never had such challenging clients before. Del’s
otherworldly “episodes” are not explained by his diagnosis, making Charlie
question everything about her mysterious charge and his dangerously attractive
son. Rafe has the answers she needs, but Charlie will have to break through his
wall of secrets to get them.
As the heat rises between Charlie and Rafe,
the deadly alien hunters circle closer. The light they seek to extinguish
flickers in the gloom of Del’s fading mind—the memory of a planet-killer that
threatens to enslave the galaxy.
Cheers, Donna
Sounds great, Donna! The characters of Happy and BiN sound like dynamic secondary characters for the story.
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