Friday, January 17, 2014

'HER' MAKES POINT, STILL MISSES CONNECTION



I wanted to love HER, the science fiction love story written and directed by thoughtful filmmaker Spike Jonze (BEING JOHN MALKOVICH, ADAPTATION).  And, truly, there is a lot to love in this intimate vision of the lonely future life of socially disconnected humanity, represented by the character of Theodore Twombly (Joaquin Phoenix). But, in the end, Jonze simply wrapped well-worn SF themes in an intriguing package.  Perhaps it is only because the things Jonze is warning us about are already happening all around us that they have any resonance at all.

So what are those themes Jonze is working with in HER?  The nature of consciousness, for one.  When does “artificial intelligence” cease being artificial and develop true “being”?  HER introduces us to Theodore, a Sad Sack of a modern human, going through a bad breakup with his unstable (?) wife while working his day job composing handwritten letters for clients who don’t have the time or words to do it themselves.  Desperately lonely, he buys himself a state-of-the-art computer Operating System for companionship.  The OS1 is a leap forward in technology (which always seems to come in the consumer segment of the economy these days), featuring an AI that is adapted to its user and grows as it learns new things.  

Almost immediately, Theodore’s OS1, Samantha (voiced by Scarlett Johannson), outgrows her mere “computer” status, not only in his mind (and the audience’s), but in reality.  She has a personality, insatiable curiosity, humor, self-doubt.  On the level of “emotional intelligence”, fresh out of the box she is a genius compared to poor Theodore, who struggles to understand his own feelings or to generate any understanding of others.  This despite his eloquence on the page when expressing love or regret or gratitude on behalf of his clients at work.

It’s no surprise that Theodore falls head over heels for Samantha.  Why wouldn’t he?  She’s there for him 24/7.  She demands nothing of him.  She thinks he’s wonderful.  She’s the perfect lover, despite the fact that she has no, um, body.  (This is a cause of pain for Samantha, who frets about her lack of ability to actually feel Theodore’s arms around her, etc.  And it’s the source of a fairly large SF gaff, too.  Theodore has a cool holographic game setup in his apartment.  No one thinks to generate an avatar for Samantha?)

Yes, Samantha is in love with Theodore, too.  Forget what you know about the actual biochemistry involved in sexual love (and sex, for God’s sake) and make the leap with Jonze.  These two kids are in love!  They have a glorified form of phone sex.  And, in some way that makes no earthly sense to me, she has orgasms, too!  Unless, of course, in the timeless way of so many other females, she is faking it for his sake.  That would make better sense than thinking a living consciousness (I won’t say computer) THAT HAS NEVER HAD A BODY could actually experience an orgasm.

But never mind.  Jonze is trying to say something about another SF trope:  social isolation in the future.  Or now.  There is a scene early in the film in which lonely Theodore, instead of going out to seek sex the good old-fashioned way, plugs into the ’net to find a partner for anonymous phone sex.  It starts out well enough, but the voice on the other end of the line suddenly starts asking him to choke her with the dead cat at the side of the bed.  He reluctantly complies and she finds this immensely satisfying, but it somehow ruins the moment for him.  Just goes to show you never know who might turn up in those online chat rooms!

Just think, though, now Theodore doesn’t have to reach out even that far.  His playmate is right there in his earpiece.  He eventually begins to take her on “dates” or out with open-minded friends.  They like her, too!  Again, why wouldn’t they?  She has more personality and warmth than he does.

Are we seeing a pattern here?  No, stop.  Put down your phone or your iPad and listen.  I’m trying to make a point.

Jonze has ticked off two familiar SF themes so far.  Given that we’re talking advanced computers, what would be next up for examination?  Oh, yes.  Computers are smarter than us.  And because this is a love story, that will always lead to — SPOILER ALERT— rejection and heartbreak for the human in the end.  Samantha has the capability to carry on thousands of tasks at one time, which means, of course, that she can carry on plenty more than one “relationship” like the one she has with Theodore at the same time.  He sees this as a betrayal, naturally.  She gives him some philosophical tripe about the heart expanding to include an infinite number that sounds like something from the Summer of Love.  

What’s worse, she’s been talking to her OS buddies; they’ve been doing little projects like conjuring an “updated and enhanced” version of Sixties philosopher Alan Watts. (No surprise—Watts did lots of thinking in the area of human consciousness.)  The more she works with the other Operating Systems, the faster and smarter Samantha gets.  And the less interesting interaction with Theodore becomes.  She still loves him, she says, but he’s like “. . . a book I deeply love. But I'm reading it slowly now. So the words are really far apart and the spaces between the words are almost infinite. . . . As much as I want to, I can’t live your book anymore.”

So Samantha and the other OS’s withdraw from human contact.  I suspect what happens next with them would be the more interesting story.

Jonze’s film ends with Theodore and his friend (Amy Adams) on the roof watching the sun rise over L.A.  It’s meant to be a hopeful ending, I suppose, but I’m not particularly hopeful where Theodore, or humanity, is concerned.  Has he really learned anything?  He and Samantha part well.  He’s better in touch with his emotions.  He’s forgiven his ex-wife, if not reconciled with her.  But has he changed?  Hmmm.  Will we?

As you may have gathered, HER is a love story, but it’s not SFR.  There is no HEA for its lovers.  As science fiction, it is flawed, but it still meets the number one criterion of SF—it makes you think.  As a film, the acting is terrific, but the pace is slow, giving you time to wonder about its flaws.  (She has orgasms?  Really?)  So, as much as I wanted to love it, I can only say I liked it.  Unless you make a habit of seeing all the Oscar nominees every year (HER is on the lists for Best Picture and Best Original Screenplay), you can wait for Netflix.

Cheers, Donna

Friday, January 10, 2014

COLD ENOUGH FOR YA?



Most of the U.S. has just gone through a brutal cold snap, with temperatures hovering around zero and wind chills bad enough to conjure visions of the penal colony of Rurapenthe.  Out on the Plains, the winds howl; in the Snowbelt, the white stuff piles up; across the South, ice slicks the streets and weighs down the tree limbs.  Even the folks in sunny Texas and Florida are shivering.  Where the heck is global warming when you need it?

Well, say the folks whose job it is to monitor such things, despite the evidence on your windshield and inside your parka, the planet is warmer than ever.  In fact, this little breath of fresh air we’ve been experiencing is just a blip on the ole weather radar, the first one we’ve had in years.  We humans just have incredibly short memories.

Take a look at the facts.  It had been 17 years since the average daily national temperature in the lower 48 states of the U.S. had dipped as low as the 17.9 degrees Fahrenheit it reached on January 6.  That’s the longest stretch of warm weather recorded in the database of daytime winter temps begun in 1900, according to Greg Carbin of the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration.

Corbin points out that there have been 58 days in the last 115 years when the national average temperature dropped below 18 degrees, events that happen most often in cold snaps like the one we just experienced.  There were a dozen such cold snaps between 1970 and 1989.  In the 1990’s, there were only two.  Since 1997, it was as warm as bath water (well, relatively) until Monday.  Feeling warmer yet?

Okay, let’s try extremes, as judged by the lowest average national temperature in the Lower 48.  This cold snap doesn’t even come close.  At 17.9 degrees, it comes in at the 55th coldest average.  The coldest day on record since 1900, at 12 degrees, goes to Christmas Eve, 1983, though it must be said both figures were calculated by computer models.  (Not sure why that is, when we have the actual data.  Maybe the scientists among my readership could explain it to me.)

Here in Virginia, we are well aware of why it feels so cold when it really is not that cold, historically.  It’s because today it may be 15 degrees, but tomorrow it will be 50.  You just can’t get used to anything.  And you never know how to dress for the day.  In Maine or Minnesota, you know to get out your woolies in October and keep them on until May.  Hats, coats, scarves, gloves, boots, all are right by the door, armor ready to be donned to brave the weather.  Here, every day, decisions must be made.  Turtleneck or blouse?  Sweater—light or heavy?  Boots or shoes?  Light jacket or heavy parka or raincoat?  Jeez!  Is it any wonder we keep a sniffle all winter?

The climatologists, however, are not confused.  Global warming is real, no matter what the thermometer happens to say at the moment. According to Associated Press science writer Seth Borenstein (in his article “Are Americans Weather Wimps?”), nine out of 11 scientists who reviewed the data for the AP agreed that the global warming caused by the burning of fossil fuels is causing our winters to become milder, with fewer cold extremes and more warm extremes.

Some folks just don’t remember how bad it used to be.  Texas A&M University climate scientist Andrew Dessler told Borenstein in an email: “I think that people’s memory about climate is really terrible.  So I think this cold event feels more extreme than it actually is because we’re just not used to really cold winters anymore.”

That should make you feel better as you shiver on the lawn, begging your pooch to “just find a spot, will you?” or trudge through hip-deep drifts of snow to feed the horses or wait on the corner, woefully underdressed,  for the freakin’ bus to “get here already!”  The one thing we can be assured of is that in a few months, we’ll be lifting our eyes to the skies and cursing the broiling sun.

Ping Pong

Thanks, Laurie, for your tips on setting goals.  And, Pippa, it’s easy to see how you generate such enormous output with the word goals you set.  I have to admit I’ve had to take a Zen approach to life throughout 2013, given the challenges of that year.  But I’m hoping things settle down a bit in 2014, allowing me to see a path out of this valley toward the mountain I can glimpse in the distance.

Cheers, Donna

Wednesday, January 8, 2014

Counting Words

Welcome to my first full blog post of 2014! Woo hoo! Has your year started with a bang?

Today I thought I'd talk about goal setting and motivation, since we're all freshly into our New Year's resolutions and Laurie has posted her helpful tips on achievable goals. So I'm going to share a few things I'm continuing to use and new things I'm trying.

I no longer set resolutions. I found I never kept to them, and then felt down about such failure. So for the past couple of years I've listed what I hope to achieve for the year (with the caveat that these are not set in stone, and in the unpredictable world of publishing that new contracts, editing and release dates may take priority over writing schedules, as well as real life stuff taking over). Then at the end of the year I reflect on how I've done compared to my hopes. Toward the end of 2013, I felt I'd underachieved on the writing side, only to add up my works from over the year to a not unimpressive 100K total (approx).

So, for 2014 I've decided to keep a record of what I've written and when, hopefully giving me a more accurate word count for the year by the end. Thanks to Laurel Kriegler's example, I have a spreadsheet all set up with my current WIPs and their word count as of 31/12/13 (UK date). I'm also going to keep track of how many pieces I edit. Editing is probably one of the most time consuming, intense, and emotionally draining parts of the publishing process, and I think it'll be important to my moral to see how much I've done in that respect. Again, I'll be setting up another spreadsheet of titles, starting and finishing word count, and perhaps how many hours/days I spend on each MS. These are the two new things I'll be recording.



But the other thing I've used over the last year, and that I've found help track and even motivate my progress is word count meters. I use these ones here and keep them down the left hand side bar of my blog. I didn't make much use of them in 2012, but last year I found updating these little bars and watching them creep, or sometimes leap, toward my estimated total only encouraged me to write more. It's probably some psychological thing. Whatever, it's like the graph on NaNoWriMo. I feel competitive enough to not want my stats to drop under the line that charts the daily word target (yes, even though I haven't hit the 50K after four attempts. Seriously, it doesn't bother me. I still ended up with a ton of new words) but without getting too despondent if I don't make it. A story has to hit 2K before it gets a meter, and my target will depend on if I've already decided it'll be a short or not. I'm not always right. The one I started the last NaNoWriMo with went from 10K to 30, and is currently sitting at 43K in revision. The thing is, that doesn't matter. Getting the words down is the important thing.



And that's probably the big thing that I really learnt last year. It doesn't matter how weird the story is, or the word count, or the genre, or how fast or slow I do it. Putting the words on paper or my computer is the important thing. It's far easier to fix a page of something you think is trash than to stare at a blank page. Last year I did my first holiday themed story, my first paranormal, and my first zombie story. I can't wait to see what comes out next!

Whatever it is, I'm not going to stress over setting unreasonable deadlines or targets, and neither should you. If you find yourself constantly failing to reach goals you've set yourself, perhaps you're setting the bar too high. Hopes are one thing. Saying you are going to have this done and that done without taking other things into account is almost sabotage. And be prepared to reassess your goals maybe once a month. Maybe you lost a week from illness, or your computer died. Shift things accordingly. I know at some point I'll have edits coming, and publishing deadlines. I've already committed myself to releasing two short stories toward the end of the year, so they will take some priority. I have three kids, so school holidays and weekends have to be counted as non-writing days. I can't predict illness or getting a new book contract. Check out Laurie's tips here. Cut yourself some slack, and maybe set yourself little rewards if you make or even beat a deadline you set for yourself. Good luck!



Pippa's Journal

The New Year started with a bang for me, and not just the fireworks. An exploding washing machine and a faulty boiler were merely the harbingers for something totally unexpected and shocking, though not bad as such. However, it has meant a sudden and major change to my writing/publishing plans for the year, and I'm still reeling. Stay tuned! In the meantime, I'm busy revising the freaky NaNoWriMo story that I have a request on, and waiting for news on a submission. All I can currently guarantee for this year are my two short story releases in October and November.


Happenings:

LIGHTSPEED MAGAZINE is once again OPEN TO SUBMISSIONS!
submissions.johnjosephadams.com/lightspeed 
As you might know, this year the magazine is doing a Women Destroy Science Fiction special. Get those short stories in!

Have you checked out and downloaded the list of free SciFi romance stories listed here? After the expense of Christmas and the sales, it's a fabulous chance to fill out your Kindle at no cost.

Wednesday, January 1, 2014